damn I'm still playing as of typing this. A) art style and design is surplus B) I think I'm keeping the fire crackling on loop, I'm sure sound design in general is incredible C) my gosh I love MC/Seven being a smart cookie, and oh lawd I ADORE the demon. giving me a bit of tsundere/himedere vibes
I have some thoughts and theories up in my head already, although I barely saw the whole game. thanks and respect fully going to the creator, this is so fun and entertaining to play!
Out of all the visual novels I’ve played, this is probably the most comfortable one—both in terms of visuals and story progression; I’ll be eagerly awaiting the continuation.❤️❤️
I really love all these dialogues that help me really love this character. I feel like I'm really talking to someone, and it's fun. I love Naku, he's funny.
Pipi I just want to say I love how much you write your characters!! He is kinda incredible I was immediately bewitched by him like I also was by a certain jester....
I am so excited to see more of the characters from both your works! Thank you so much! ♡♡♡
gahhh this is awesome! i really like how you designed naku and wrote the story as well as the dialogue. i liked trying to gauge naku's reactions; he really seems like the type to like getting his ego stroke xc overall, i'm hooked!
wishing you tons of luck with this side project <33
Oh Pipi, between the one art with the special ingredient of the soup and what you said about a certain Jester`s bodily fluids, "spicy cream soup" has never been more suspicious
I cannot believe that there aren't as many comments as I expected, the artstyle is eye-catching so I assumed that there would be more reviews. I loved the animations, it's hard to believe that this is someone's frist game after seeing the dedication. As for the script, there are indeed some mistakes. Most of them are just simple mistakes, like the missuse of a dot or capitals, but here's what I thought that could be re-phrased (I want to clarify that I'm also not sure if what I'm saying is correct or not, since English is also not my first language).
Since the same words are repeated later you could use another adjetive, such as "blunt". I'm not sure if a translator would offer you different adjetives, but checking out an urban dictionary could help.
I think it's more fitting to say:
"There's something with the way he said my name. It made a cold sweat run down my back, not even the freezing wind from outside can make it dissappear"
"He said that like it was the most normal/common thing in the world."
I'm only pointing these out since you requested it on the game's desc. I think that the game is properly made, hopefully you don't give up and continue it.
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Jefecita por favor no abandone este maravilloso juego <3
Espero en algún futuro esté en español y Android yo te esperaré el tiempo necesario chiqui bebi
I Need this on Android 😭, It looks so amazing and I want to play it so badly pleaseeeee!
Please make this in android and take your time too! I'm so interested in this but I can't play😭
Олений талисман🦌
Круто, жду проду💖
In love with this vn already, thank uu pipi for this masterpiece >.<
I hope its able to be played in browser some day! excited to play if that happens :)
damn I'm still playing as of typing this. A) art style and design is surplus B) I think I'm keeping the fire crackling on loop, I'm sure sound design in general is incredible
C) my gosh I love MC/Seven being a smart cookie, and oh lawd I ADORE the demon. giving me a bit of tsundere/himedere vibes
I have some thoughts and theories up in my head already, although I barely saw the whole game. thanks and respect fully going to the creator, this is so fun and entertaining to play!
PONLO PARA MACCC TE LO SUPLICOOOOO T T
Out of all the visual novels I’ve played, this is probably the most comfortable one—both in terms of visuals and story progression; I’ll be eagerly awaiting the continuation.❤️❤️
really intrigued, hope to see more of this arrogant deer man soon!!
Yo lo quisiera para android :'v
Bro, Do a build of the .apk version for phone, it's just hard when you don't have a PC😮💨. Thanks
Ugh! Sadly none for mac yet :C
cant wait for day 2 and more😭
Para android porfis 😭💕
Con JoiPlay puedes jugarlo
I wanna play......but i don't have a computer;_;
amazing
Hii! Can you do for Android please? I'd love to play the visual novel 😭
Tremenda joyita 🔥
Ostia
Volveré en cuanto esté para Android 👹
QUIERO MAAAAAAAAAAS ME ENCANTOOOOOOOOOOOO
Me gustó demaciado!, muy buena suerte con este proyecto. 💖
Versão para Android por favor 😭😭
I really love all these dialogues that help me really love this character. I feel like I'm really talking to someone, and it's fun. I love Naku, he's funny.
Pipi I just want to say I love how much you write your characters!! He is kinda incredible I was immediately bewitched by him like I also was by a certain jester....
I am so excited to see more of the characters from both your works! Thank you so much! ♡♡♡
Amazing !! I loved the story and the art a lot, keep it up !! ₍₍ (̨̡⸝⸝´꒳`⸝⸝)̧̢ ₎₎
I can't wait for more <3
Oh noo, a hot demon want to eat me, what should I do ?
gahhh this is awesome! i really like how you designed naku and wrote the story as well as the dialogue. i liked trying to gauge naku's reactions; he really seems like the type to like getting his ego stroke xc overall, i'm hooked!
wishing you tons of luck with this side project <33
Pipi<3
Oh Pipi, between the one art with the special ingredient of the soup and what you said about a certain Jester`s bodily fluids, "spicy cream soup" has never been more suspicious
He look's like The Knocker haha XD
I cannot believe that there aren't as many comments as I expected, the artstyle is eye-catching so I assumed that there would be more reviews. I loved the animations, it's hard to believe that this is someone's frist game after seeing the dedication.
As for the script, there are indeed some mistakes. Most of them are just simple mistakes, like the missuse of a dot or capitals, but here's what I thought that could be re-phrased (I want to clarify that I'm also not sure if what I'm saying is correct or not, since English is also not my first language).
Since the same words are repeated later you could use another adjetive, such as "blunt". I'm not sure if a translator would offer you different adjetives, but checking out an urban dictionary could help.
I think it's more fitting to say:
"There's something with the way he said my name. It made a cold sweat run down my back, not even the freezing wind from outside can make it dissappear"
"He said that like it was the most normal/common thing in the world."
I'm only pointing these out since you requested it on the game's desc. I think that the game is properly made, hopefully you don't give up and continue it.